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First three chapters of my book: Grey Water, promise me my freedom.

1

Of course, it is one of those things that is always around us, carrying with it among the most prominent fuels of our being. Yet, you barely notice the air when stationary. The train it is different. The train moves at such a velocity that suddenly - everything is subject to change. I look outside through the cracks in the timber and watch the world as it filters in and out of existence. Trees, mountains, tracks, vast divides altogether real enough to touch, are suddenly morphing into hazed mirages. I no longer have any way of knowing if they were, are or ever will be, entirely real. Such a burden is the knowledge. How my hair becomes sticky with existential dread.
               I first boarded the train some two or three hours ago. Since then I have remained nestled between the mail bags. May you be concerned as to how I have not moved. It is true my limbs have begun cramping in this stiffened position. Oh how my poor leg aches. But the bags have provided cushion enough that movement need not yet be marked a sin. The harsh ignition of the train does much to blur the knowledge of my presence, and any knowledge missed is cushioned and saved by the paper stuffed linen. You need to let your presence settle. Human beings are fools yes, but they are not as foolish as one might think. They can sense when something is different, and they turn sinister and vindictive in its face. When something does not belong, it is with this knowledge they destroy it. So, you cannot come in; all guns blazing and expect to make it out unscathed. I guarantee the money, even when safe and secured in your hands will still give you paper cuts. There is a real patience to this. An art. They need suspect nothing. They need only be left to wonder if you ever were, are or will be entirely real.
               A few more hours pass by and the driver and attendants have surely become lulled enough by the steady static momentum of the train. I begin rummaging through the bags to find the mail checks amongst the torrents of letters. How desolate and desperate people are to remain entangled with each other. How vast the distances they deem appropriate for words to cross. Words on paper and paper in my hands. I empty one of the mail bags onto the floor and beginning filling it with my now collection of mail checks and securities.
               I move to the carriage door and fling it open. The entire carriage now alights. I can hear the burning from behind me. The mail bags full of letters, and the collections now splayed across the floor are being enlivened by the thrust of the wind. I can see them, as they itch towards their escape. Their bodies crawling from the lips of the bags, flickering their way to the exit. I watch as they fling themselves into the wind and are swept up and carried away into the wilderness. Again someone somewhere deemed their journey significant enough to take. Standing in lines, licking stamps and crafting words, and so to repay them, they fling themselves out through the open carriage door. Falling graciously to the wind I wrap my fingers around a sturdy piece of motion hot timber, nearing the ledge. 
               The train vibrating beneath my palms. It would appear we both find ourselves electrified under the bonds of pressure. Pushing my chest up against it I hear the sound of my own heartbeat as each turn of the wheels ripples through my body. Painfully apparent becomes the difference in our breathing. Mine, struggling against the distinct shifts as the mechanics and motivations of the train alter and waver. The wind as it is, is ice cold and ferocious on my skin. In invisible lashes it attacks my cheeks. It brings with it an acute kind of burning. The sensation draws the blood vessels to the surface and electrifies the humble human landscape. I pull the body still closer to me. The grip tightens and so ignites a definitive, visceral, cognitive shift. Slipping away from my breath goes its heightened human rhythm. Morphing with the mechanics. My bodily cogs are replaced by the train wheels as they turn.
               I open my eyes. The tear ducts left open to assault from the air. So too are they hypnotised where they water, so the droplets are swept up and carried out through the door. I pull my eyes to shelter behind the wood. My face pressed against the body. I extend my hand out into the opening. The shifting, suctioning aperture of space. There I try to hold my hand beneath the near brute force that leaves my fingers jostling and livid in the air. The wind might very well freeze them at the sockets and rip them off in chunks. In that moment I would be left with little more than cavernous stubs serving as an enduring emblem of my own senselessness. Yet, I cannot find the instinct to pull the hand back inside. My eyes will not turn away as they uncontrollably waver against the rush.
               It is only with a jolt of the train lines that my concentration is broken. I am jostled forward, needing pull myself back inside the carriage. I look down to my fingers, they have started going blue against the wind. I tuck them under my shirt and lay my body on the floor. I feel the shift begin again as my body dislodges and sinks into the hardwood. I can feel with much greater accuracy now when the train begins changing its mind. My arms firmly rap around the linen bag of adrenaline and checks. My heartbeat slowing as I wait patiently for my moment to come, when I too will be suddenly moved to fling myself through the door.


2

The cool eastern breeze that moves over the bay operates unlike anything I have ever known. How gentle is the calling that so arrests and overwhelms me. The waves lap at the shore. Entangled in its fingers the wind carries the sound. Effortlessly cradling its image so even over the concrete dips and throughs of this metropolitan kingdom, they cannot be kept from me. I sit here in my lonesome window. The world beyond and below still hums and buzzes in the same consistency as the messenger who whispers day after day. The people move by, crawling across my vision. I like to place my finger on the glass of the window and press down over their tiny bodies and imagine them squishing beneath. I hold my thumb until I can feel their pain through my finger. If I was to keep pushing, the window would surely shatter. Breaking into shards and imbedding itself deep within my skin. The bones in my finger would splinter and crack so they protrude until the two worlds of glass and bone are left attacking each other. The flesh caught and torn to shreds in the middle. I release the pressure, turning my finger to me, expecting to see the subtle red droplets of the pierced human flesh, yet all I catch is the gentle white as it begins fading back to red in the blood rush. The people below continue in their daily bliss, unaware of my feeble endeavours towards their destruction.
               They go on in their steadfast immediacy. Not swept up in the back and forth comparison between past and present, self and self, shore and shore which have so governed my existence. The obsession with the division and duality arises more and more violent till the view from the hotel window is power enough to incite the roaring state of delirium. I close my eyes in reprieve. Trying to blur our entanglement, only to give rise to my other senses. The auditory now richer. The smells now more capable then ever of driving waft and diffusing into the walls. In seeps the fumes of car gas, the familiar breeze of coffee shops and bakeries. Even the ever-enduring allure of garbage and waste marks the cornerstone presence of humanity. Yet, all is made effortlessly subordinate to the salt as it circulates in the air and cuts the human aromas in two. I can taste it on my tongue. One pain dulls, so another can merely rise and take its place.
               The fog horns blare and wale in the distance. The waves crash against the bellows of the ships so that in the resulting momentum they can fling themselves back and forth between the shores. They drift with only slight variation. Each creeping to the sand with a dampening immediacy, only daring touch the world for a moment before returning to its familiar void. Again and again they wash up and appear in their likeness. Unaltered, they seem, by each journey across the bay, yet not accounted for is the consequence of the currents, who take with them, the fundamental vigour of their existence. Through the water the waves are helpless but to mingle with each other so that with each revolving journey they return to the shore, fundamentally changed, no matter how visible to the naked eye.
               When the pain of enclosure becomes too great, sometimes I dare walk the streets. How easy it is to become lost in this city. I look to the images through the windows, the people glowing in the soft evening light of freedom. They go about their business, meticulously rearranging sets on their tables, priming centrepiece flowers in vases and repositioning the chairs. I see them as they come home. Losing the definition of their faces and figures as they conceal themselves behind radiant glazed windows. I catch their silhouette as they hang their coats by the door. Their bodies once having been basking happily in the incubated heat, have now deemed it unnecessary in their welcome home. I wonder if they know how effortless it is for strangers to peer into their world. To understand the intricacies of their existence as it jostles around the partition. The white walls having been stained yellow in all the years they have spent seeped in happiness.
               I stand here at the threshold, helpless but to imagine how they likely operate as they do, as a direct result of the resolute knowledge, that anyone who might pass the time gazing into their world from the outside in, could scarcely know enough about it to pose any real or genuine threat.
               I try to keep at least my simple visceral body planted to the ground. I cling to the poles and the drain grates, the lamps and the benches, yet at any given moment my soul may leave my body and seamlessly transverse the obstacles in its way. And so it does. I watch as it drifts from me. It moves closer than I am capable to the window. It places its hand on the glass, and studies with more accuracy than I am able, the movements as they present themselves. I wait as it lingers there for a moment, trying, long-suffering, to feel the warmth on its skin. Still it remains cold and damp and blue. In one saddening, honest moment it pulls away. I hope it might come back to me. I know instead it will fling itself into the air and glide over the hills which divide us and the water’s edge. I make my knowing way down to the shore. It is little beyond useless to try and keep the two from one another. I watch as it dances again with the wind, cradling and enveloping each other over the liquid silver as it waves. I take off my shoes to sink my free feet into the cold sand. Shackled they are again to the memory of life beyond this promised serenity.


3

“I didn’t even know sound could travel like that.”
The salt, having been carried by the wind from the water, scales the sandstone and greywacke and crystallises in our hair. The residue burns in the wounds of our mind.
“It can’t, you’re just changing.”
“Changing?”

We can’t see clearly though the opaque windows or the towering cream walls. It makes us as good as blind in here. The mainland is more than a hundred yards away yet I can still hear it, and smell it, and taste it as if it were next door. If I could walk on water, I swear it would take me no more than ten minutes to get to it. But I of course, cannot walk on water.
               I enter from the courtyard. Again the same series of steps shuffle all around and above me, the steel door opening and shutting behind. The sound echoes through the block. I can hear the guards as they pace back and forth along the railing. Each one is positioned on top of the other, their footsteps meet each other in a steady measure. Any jarring would be a distraction, any sound out of place, a concern, any voluntary movement a threat. They need be constantly aware of us. Us, and each other. Meticulous and painstaking. The keys turn in the locks. The bar door slides open and slams shut. Every day, the same thing. 

“It’s like we’re morphing into some kind of wayward beasts, rattling around these cages.”
Looking up at the sky. The whole vision awash in steady pastel blue. Truly, paradoxically clear.
“We already were beasts.”
“Not me, I had a life, I had a family.”
“And you gave it all up? For this?”
“So what’s this place meant to make of us then?”
“Whatever it wants.”

The thin cotton mattress isn’t near enough to break my fall. Still I fling myself onto it. Any reprieve, no matter how fleeting, is still reprieve. The stings dig into my back through the fabric. I stare up again at the ceiling. The cracks are growing wider and wider each day. I thrust my fist against the wall sending vibrations through the foundations so that flecks of plaster fall to my face. I feel them rest on my skin. I peer out through the bars. All clear. Standing on top of my bed I push against the ceiling. Along the opening are indentation made markings of each day that the slit has grown. I place my hand against the roof to steady myself. I use my fingernail to scrap an indent into the plaster, marking its journey as it continues. This section appears particularly persistent; it does not fall as easily to the pressure. I push my hand harder against the roof, attempting to leverage enough force to make the incision. The plaster refuses to give as I dig it deeper and deeper until my steadying hand crashes through the roof’s surface.

“You could get out of here couldn’t you?”
The words burn.
“You could.”
“It’s not possible.”
“You could.”
“It’s not possible.”
“But you’ve thought about it, haven’t you?”

The concrete made lacerations on my skin as I moved through it. Once I had the opening in the roof, I stuffed it with pillows pasted with toilet paper, but it couldn’t last long. I started stealing files and picks from the wood shop. The moment I had everything it couldn’t have been more than a day later. Because of the way the sound carries from the outside in, and the way the city enlivens at night, you’d be surprised how much you can get away with. It wasn’t until I hit the water that I had any idea what I had done.
               So came the night when the city moved with a particular vivacity. Not near enough to rouse any sleep deprived mind but sufficient enough to captivate any lingering insomnia or provide excuse for a suspicious noise echoing through the cell block. I pushed the pillow from the opening. Carefully I picked away at the surrounding brick and plaster until the hole was big enough to hoist my body through. The concrete made lacerations on my skin as I moved through it. I crawled along the framework of the interior, careful not to send any limb hurtling through an unsuspecting unit. The floors of the cell block could be bypassed through the section of brick concealing a network of water and heat pipes. The channel led all the way to the ground. I was on the second floor. I crawled until I reached it. I manoeuvre my body through the network. Every now and again my skin is singed having gripped or rested too long on the hot steel. Finally I find my feet planted in the opening below. In the undergrowth I crawl through the dirt and mud until I reach the now sole wall between myself and freedom.

“It’s not possible.”
“Why not?”
“You don’t know what’s out there.”
How ominous and sinister.
“Then what’s out there?”

The water doesn’t move like the air. No, it doesn’t cause your hands to flicker like the wind, allowing them to waver and return, never entirely at risk of a battle lost, or being divided from its sockets. No. Water gets into everything. It drew me down to the rock’s edge. There is a reason why no one considers these straits possible to cross. The moon flickers on the surface. I am made helpless and delirious in the simple fact that once again I can see. There across the bay is the constellation of life. The lights from windows and buildings, offices and homes as people breathe without the weight of their own destruction. They move freely in the air beyond exile and punishment and reminder of their own pertinent guilt. I feel the soft breeze on my skin. I can still hear it as it calls to me. The waves move enchantingly and enthrallingly in anticipation. There is nothing I can do to stop myself from slipping into the water.

“Ask me again, and I’ll smash you face into the concrete.”

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